THANK GOD ANOTHER PERSON WHO LIKES THE CUTE SIMPLE LOVE STORY! You know I was kinda getting sick of the relationships that have them say they love each other but then something happens and they break up and they get back together and it was just getting old. So I am completely in love with this story! I loved how it was so hard for them to fall in love but when they did they stayed (really glad you didn't make them break up) I thought it was cute how you showed the love between them. It was a cute story that i enjoyed reading every moment! Brilliant! Love it great job keep writing i want to hear more from you!

Hey there! I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier!! I absolutely love this story and I didn't realize I wasn't reviewing. As I was reading, I suddenly realized something about this story that was like a conk in the head. My name is Jessica and my boyfriends name is Derek! Hahaha! I'm such a retard. Love the story :)

omg omg omg plz plz plz plz make a sequel 2 this i loved it and i read it all in one night thats how much i couldn't get enough of it im also reading making him notice then im goin to read the sequel of that one plz right a sequel for this one pretty please with a cherry on top

wow.. fourth child?? ahahah they need a tv

its good so far, but i think there are way too many exclamation points in this chapter. they're suppose to make a sentence seen exciting, or something, but when there are so many, it makes it weird.

Aww, it was so sweet! Love the happy ending and the baby boy having his father's smirk, to cute. Great story!

bravo, bravo

ahh, sweet chapter

cute story

aww...this story is soo cute!! i love it!

xoxo
failwithpride

Omg! That was one of the best stories i've ever read!
I especially loved the epilogue!
i'm glad no one died or anything, i hate sad stories!
I can't wait to check out your other stories!

I loved this story! Great job! I love Derek and Jess together, they are so cute!

you should make a story staring Anthony Sanders

It is a very sweet story. I like it.

aw i want more! i loved this. i had the perfect image of them and like you said they make a great couple the kids are even cuter!