This story is one of the best. I can't wait to read how it ends. Update soon.

cool story. keep it up

Go you! This story is so amazing, i'm falling in love with Derek myself the man sounds so amazing and hot!

-Ginne

wow, yes i suppose I did see it coming lol. You wrote it well though and he got her that dog How

Aww he got her a puppy. How sweet?

I like his last line, about the relationship not being just sex. It shows a lot about his character. LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP HUNS!

O. So sweet. maybe not the sex part but it was so sweet. O. Anyway, great update (:

update soon!

aw derek is so freaking sweet..wish have a boyfriend like that...i am so jealous of her...well keep updating girl...so loving it...can't wait the next chapter to post...well gotta go now...so peace out then...

omg! I just read this through and I refuse to belive that this was your first story. *_* It's really good cept for a few typo's and quite a few missing hyphons. though I'm not sure if the story is done?

i love this! that was soo sweet...i like how u made it sound sweet instead of perverted...anyways, keep up the great work!

i like the name bella anthony

aw oh my gosh...how amazing and sweet is that. thats awesome. you did a good job. update soon.

I had a feeling they were gonna do it at the cabin, the place that their feelings flared. I can't wait to read more.

man do i love this stry, fantastic read, updaate soon.