Reviews for This can't be happening
thats.the.beauty.of.it 12/19/05 . chapter 16
awesome story...can i give u one piece of advice? in your author notes...and summary of the stpory-don't tell us they are not going to break up-it ruins it just a bit-thanks
BrownEyedBeauty 12/14/05 . chapter 16
This is the third story I've read, that you have written. Your stories are honestly the best, and this one is awesome.

It's really nice that her mom is okay with everything, and I hope you get to the "good" part soon.

I hope you update all your stories soon, and it's too bad about your computer! Good Luck )
idontgetit91 12/13/05 . chapter 16
I loved it. They're gonna do it aren't they? I know they will, just don't make it too graphic. Naughty naughty for a not too grand progress report. I hope there were no low grades in English.
bex17 12/11/05 . chapter 16
Okay, I have read all of these chapers and I haven't reviewed AT ALL. Sorry, I'm such a freak, but I got caught up in it! Update soon!
LilLaTLuv 12/10/05 . chapter 16
Hey!

So, are they having sex, or are they just sleeping together? Anywho, last chappie was HILARIOUS! I loved it! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, my grandfather was in an accident and we went up there and they didn't have computers, so I couldn't. SORRY! Great chappies! Loved 'em! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?

Luv ya,Tashi :)
xJosiev88x 12/10/05 . chapter 16
It's so cool her mom is cool with him staying over.
lori 12/9/05 . chapter 14
great story! keep the momentum up! it's a bit cliche but that's ok. It's sad that they just got rid of a "supposed" bestfriend lisa that easily. maybe you could have written it better, its kind of a big deal to lose a friend, or maybe lisa could not be such a bitch and they could make up. i don't know. anyways. how about Derek and Jessica get too serious and one gets scared, ignores the other, the other starts to get ideas about infidelity, enter a guy that's interested in jessica or a girl that's interested in derek and plots against them. they break up, and make up.
TaurusGirl7 12/8/05 . chapter 16
aww! update sooN!
Jess 12/8/05 . chapter 16
WOOT! another chapter...so great. loves it. awesome work there. please continue soon...lol...i know the feeling. i've been banned from using my computer for a week...so i'm using a friends computer instead...bloody studies...ugh. newho. keep going please!Jess
sexyz-bratz 12/8/05 . chapter 16
well, u got me hooked. i dont usually read long chapters, but i got hook on urs. i really did. I luv Derek and Jessica together, its kinda hard to see them hating each other b4, i mean, look at them now! i love ur story, i really do! please udpate soon!
pottazcutey 12/7/05 . chapter 16
This story is great and I'm so glad that you are not breaking Jess and Derek up. They sound so cute. Anyway, maybe you can insert one big argument in between and theylooked depressed without each other and friends help them to patch up. Something like that. (: cant wait for your next update. Keep writting (:
BangBangYourDead 12/7/05 . chapter 16
Aw! Sweet ending. I cant get enough of your story.

Update Soon.
devil's-fav-angel 12/7/05 . chapter 16
nice
dOrKy-GuRl03 12/7/05 . chapter 16
that was a good chapter...aww wonder what happens to derek though?...must be tough then i guess?...well keep updating girl...so loving it...can't wait the next chapter to be update though...well peace out then girl...
untitled furniture 12/7/05 . chapter 1
I like it! but I'm only on the first chapter and I have to finish a chapter for my story (Reviewrs are getting impatient) So I'll just stop here. (Darn.) Hey, it like I'm using this review as a bookmark! (Laughs like the dummy she is) If you're not laughing with me, pretend to laugh. Ha-Ha-Ha. Ok I'm leaving, I must be bothering the hell out of you.

-Tweetz

(Any mispelled words, sorry!)
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