It wasn't boring. I like how you made flaws in your character, and the way you put poetry in her father's message.

Ah, mystery again at the end. Elizabeth seems an interesting character-I feel like her a lot, I want another hour of sleep! A look into the past, and lots of detail. I think you did a nice job on this chapter.

Mysterious and emotional, I like this beginning, it has a nice feel. It flows well too. Nice job :)

Mood: Topsy-turvey.

Well, great beginning! Real mysterious. Is Gloria dead? Well, update soon!

-Mako_streak

This seems like a very original and well-written story. I will enjoy reading more of it.