The words bring vivid imagery to mind. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

Yay! I'm a firefly!! I always loved those things..hehe..

Extended metaphors are fun to read..I love how you didn't end with saying Christians bask in Jesus' light, and love and adore Him. I mean, of course I do...He is my Everything, but I won't deny the times that I've stumbled.

Lovely poem. Praise God for authors like you!

God Bless!!

;)allie

Well, I might be an Atheist, but I still liked this powm and all its glory, it had an understanding and interesting message to convey, and a true for for the most part that many lose faith in harsh times.

This is beautiful! But just a suggestion: forget rhyme schemes and just say it. True feelings have their own natural rhythm. Thanks for reviewing my poem!Mysti

this is an excellent poem.I really liked it, keep up the great work.Don't ever quit writing poems.

That's neat how you compared us to fireflies. Wonderful poem. It's going on my favs too :).

What a perfect comparison.

You have a gift of writing from God! Not only is this comparison good but the your passion is also. OKay, I have decided, I'm putting you on my favourite authors list lol =) xRachx oh and ps. Fire flies is also relevant cuz we contain the passion (fire) of God...lol...yeah...im so lame lol

definitely the best one by you that i've read so far. ^^ excellent portrayal of reality with beautiful wording...this rocks house. have a nice day

Perfect comparison. An excellent poem.

i enjoyed it. i think we're kinda like the moon 2.

Jesus-sun

Us-moon

the moon reflects the suns light like we do

oops, sry, i began to rant again...

What's to be ashamed of? This piece is excellent. It is the truth. Keep on, spreading the word. God Bless ya!

Needa S.

i like this. i don't believe in god, but i think this was great.

anyone who gets wigged about the comparison is a little odd. half the time you lot are compared to sheep who stink, spit, and have really greasy hair and fleas. i personally think that fire flies are an imporvement.

i'm sorry if that offended you, i didn't mean anything by it. just wanted to give you some light encouragement.

again, lovely poem.

profection, I loved it.

Wow! That was really good! I liked the way you compared our spirituality to fireflies! rock out loud! lol =)