that's so sad. angsty. i can't believe i haven't reviewed it before, but there you are, my dear. So cool (no pun intended) i like the idea that the ice silcences the blood in the veins, but you need to be cold when you do that, don't you?

I love your work. and you are such a brilliant artist. I have to copy your work to a file so I can read it whenever. giving you all the credit of course. I despise people who can't think for themselves. Mel

Very, very good. I like way as you portray death as kind of an Iceman. I also like the wineglass line as well. All the pieces fit well within this song.

oh! how lovely! -kisses you-

that was an awsome song. my wineglass is raised to a fellow songwriter.

you know...this could very well be one of the best i've read by you...love it.

This is really, really good. There's something about the way you wrote it. Good work. :D

[Please review some of my work. :) If you have time. Thanks. :D]

Struggling-soul

I loved this... Written very well... Brought a pain to my heart... Do you happen to have a melody to this? Anyway, beautiful work! :-)

Skylar Rose

Awesome! If this is the one I insisted you put up, I'm happy I did it!