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| Projectile Cupcakes 2008-03-03 ch 2,   | Ah! Hotness. This story is amazing. I hope you know you ended at an extremely evil point. I wonder what will happen next? *Claps* I'm so excited. Whoot! More! Tyler is hot! |
| yaoilicious 2007-06-18 ch 2, | Please... write... MORE... I want to see what happens next. TwT |
| puppy dog eyes 2006-07-02 ch 2, | Very good start for your story. It has just the right amount of detail. Does Reiketsu have multiple personalities or is it really someone else? |
| somethingsup 2005-12-28 ch 2, | Love it, love it, love it! lol |
| kini T (AGAIN!) 2005-09-06 ch 2, | WA u still havent updated :(i was wondering if Reiketsu has 2 sides? evil side Kaitoe, good side Reiketsu?... |
| kini 2005-09-01 ch 2, | WAA why havent u updated yet? PLEASE UPDATE! |
| Shonen Nagasaki 2005-08-31 ch 2, | Hey! I read that lame book too! You're story is on Kini Takohashi's fav story list, that's how I found it and just to let you know, THAT WAS SO COOL! But I'm confused like the title of the chapter says...oh well, I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter to find out WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON WITH REIKETSU...Do you like Yaoi? Have you ever heard of the Yaoi Revolution? Are you a member yet? |
| Sreym 2005-08-15 ch 2, | I'm a little confused by the ending, but intrigued. I can't wait for more, I love it! Update SOON! |
| Kini Takohashi 2005-08-13 ch 2, | AI! I NEED MORE! WAA! YOUR SO MEAN MAKING ME WAIT A WHOLE WEEK! *cries* |
| CHOO CHOO CHERRIES 2005-08-12 ch 2, | !YAY! I LOVE IT! and I'm like so looking forward to all those other story updates and all...ugh i was half through the story and i hear NATY TURN OFF THAT COMPUTER AND GO CLEAN YOU BATHROOM NOW! yes it was my mother.. ah but i finished! and read on and can't wait til you update again!...OH and you know...im sad cuz..cuz..you haven't talked to me or emailed me in like a WEK! but i guess its cuz u updated...or so i tell myself...ok well yes LOVE YOU! |
| Kini Takohashi 2005-08-05 ch 1, | AH! *squeals with delight*MORE! NEED MORE! PLEASE I'm BEGGING YOU!MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH? PLEZ?? WILL YOU SIGN MY HEAD?! *hands you a permanent marker* WRITE 'TO MY BIGGEST FAN'!E! I LOVE YOU!PLEASE WILL YOU WRITE MORE??! I PROMISE TO UPDATE ON ANY STORY OF MINE THAT YOU WANT IF YOU DO! NO?! WHAT IF I REVEIW EVERY CHAPTER? AND I'LL EVEN READ ALL YOUR STUFF! PLEASE!-your loyal servant Kini Takohashi- |
| CHOO CHOO CHERRIES 2005-07-24 ch 1, | i love it!...yes...update soon! |
| WindStarsAndWave 2005-07-23 ch 1, | :) Hmm hello~ :D; I'm not sure which of your stories exactly that you wanted me to be, and how much constructive criticism you actually wanted~ ^^ So I read this one 'cause it's the newest, yay~ D: But it was really good, and other than I few barely noticable mistakes it was super well written too! Haha but the mistakes I'm talking about are the kind of mistakes everyone still makes when typing~~ D: Like to in stead of too and things like that. :) As a remedy you might want to consider getting yourself a super picky beta reader~ >>; I am still looking for one myself... lol~ :D Anyway, aside from all of that stuff... DX It was very good and I really want to know what happens... So you'd better update it quick~~ :) Don't be like mee and wait seven months~ D: lol~ |
| Sreym 2005-07-22 ch 1, | I really hope you update this soon, I love it :) |
| Tinker101 2005-07-21 ch 1, | LOVE IT! They both sound really, really hot! lol update soon! :0 |