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Reviews For: Tale of a Hypocrite

DARKANGELICA789
2008-03-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI LOVE IT
Liz919
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuse"I'm gonna have to thank Alex. What? Nevermind." Lol funniest thing evar. It was adorable. And well written and funny too. Triple threat. Way to go.
cormorant
2006-09-25
ch 1,
abuseFluff. Good ol fluff though.
Nikerym 'Ksherea
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseit's cute, cliché, but cute. it flows well, and i do like the 'hypocrite' part of it.

the ending is a bit abrupt. it isn't too terrible though, and it does make sense to go with the short quick style of this story. anyway, lovely little short. ^_^
Dream Guardian
2005-08-11
ch 1,
abuseYep, I'm still up. That's what happens when you have *two* mornings in one freakin' day...blah...

I really liked this one. But too bad no one got to spike any punch in it. *sighs*

I have that Australian folk song stuck in my head. The one you thought was evil. Ah! I can't stop singing it!

"A sheep or two and a kangaroo..."
Inherent
2005-07-19
ch 1,
abuseAww... I liked it, it was sweet.
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