WHY! It was so good, and you ended it right then! You must post more, PLZ! It was a good read.

Gonna update sometime before we DIE? You were so good at updating, and as soon as there is a cliffhanger, you disappear for three months. Gawd. Thanks.

JAMES! I HATE CLIFFIES!! This is W.B. (growls in anger)This story is so wrong. Who did he chose? He chose Artemis didn't he? Oh, well update soon.

Who does Rei pic? WHO! WHO! hehe hi me again. Still reading, still loving.

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Yo Dude, it's me, Dlas. you keep telling me to write a review so here you go. It's a rockin story, well written and understandable. I'm still ** you had them raped, but i can get over it if your little "endings" are all you say they'll be. Make sure they're not all lemon and have an actualy good closure to them. Make sure you tell about what happens a few years down the road, like Love Hina. Also, nice touch with the catgirl and collar. There, Happy, no more buggin me at school about writing a review.

Nice. This story is reall interesting and good, and I really like it.

Just on a side note, I hope he picks Aril. I don't know why, but she's my favorite.

I liked Vampy's past, it really made me understand why she is how she is. I lurve this story!!

Okay. I am now in love with this story. The characterization is amazing, every person has completely different and unique personalities (which is obviously what you were shooting for), and they are very real. Real as in, I can imagine them being the way they are if they were actual people... Anyway, update soon!

I love this story! This is one of the best storylines I have seen, and I have read a lot of books. I like how you mad each of the characters different, with their own personality. I also like how you made magic in this story. It is different from most other fantasies. I loved this story so much that I am reading it again (in case you were wondering why I am reviewing chapter one).

This is a really good story. Rai is the type of characters in stories that I like. I can't believe that some of the girls got raped...I hope Sri nor Selena gets raped...

he loves artemis doesnt he, like really loves her.

... still kinda creepy... but I hope ralph is dead... and all I can think about when you have those white out things for Rai is WTF IS HAPPENING WHILE THAT HAPPENS! ...so, yeah... you're a really good writer... and I hope to read more soon.

Rai seemed more like a BOM lol

Ew, ew, ew. Ok for some reason I still want to read the next chapter. But NO! Poor Vampy, Crystal, and Aril! Why did you have to make them get raped! And why the heck did Vampy do a show for a dragon? I'm utterly confused and disgusted..but for some strange reason I--want--to--keep--reading! Hmm..Maybe it's because I really, REALLY like Rai. Wish he was my friend :) UPDATE! Please? ;0

For the love of god!! Why can't any one leave them alone?? Rai ain't even safe in his own home.