This was light and airy, and a very fun read. I can just picture this guy...known quite a few like him.

You have an amazing vocab, and a way of mixing words that's quite unique. It's refreshing and disturbing all at once. =)

I agree, you have a really clean, original way of describing things that's easy and difficult to read at the same time. That doesn't make sense. What I mean is that it's extremely descriptive, but not all-telling. Nice.

Thanks for your review. It helped shake me, needed that, I was getting lazy(er). I don't know what to do about that poem, so I'm gonna leave it, forget about it.

I'm on both sides of this here. I feel both in hate and in love with the subject of this poem. That's wrong. So wrong, bit it feels right.

Reminds me of my first love (more like like, actually)- and then also disturbingly of a broken friendship.

You're in danger of being added to my favorites list.

watch out.

-simpleton

hee haw, terrific fun...

nice job

I always love your writing style. How the hell do you come up with those descriptions? Sheer brilliance.

But you already know this =P.

LaDiablo

The descriptions are wonderful. This flows like that seventh shot that you know you shouldn't take. Very fun poem.

You write so well. Unfortunately, I can't offer you constructive criticism on this [so is this review pointless ?]. Anyways, the mood's very fine.((By the way, sorry I suck))