I love this so much just because I can relate to it.

Your writing is very inspiring.

i loved this poem and the ryming makes it great! :) awesome job keep writing :)

Absolutely wonderful

Nice and sweet, good rhyming.

no one can resist rhyming...its a chronic syndrome

i love it the rhyme was the best and the wording was simply great...well done. lots of love AllyCred

I love the way it climaxes towards the end, and the rhyming is done really well, subtle but effective. I like it a lot. Good job!

I love the way it builds and is all tied together in the last stanza.

aw. what a short sweet poem.

i liked it.

wow, i liked this song alot. its really short, though. i liked it so much i wish you would add more. but, of course your don't have to. well, KW! and thanx for the nice reviews! i'm so glad u enjoy my work!davida

It's kind of neat to find a tuesday's child on here, most people are wednesday's and I'm the man who was thursday. It all works out. And about the poem... It's got a nice rhyme to it, I didn't notice it in some places, which is good, because it was all the more subtle.

wow, this is excellent. Kind of reminds me of teenagers who dream of being famous, because they cant stand their own lives. Good job : )

nice personification... it flows well too... nice job.. great poem... thanks for your review

I enjoyed this poem very much. It feels so honest and innocent and beautiful in the most pure degree. Music truly is beautiful, and you portrayed it very well. :)

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Good rhyming, nice flow. Lovely piece. queenvixta