|Reviews for Melody and Tears|
| agirlnamed-aly 8/22/05 . chapter 1
I love this so much just because I can relate to it.
Your writing is very inspiring.
| I can't believe it's over 8/3/05 . chapter 1
i loved this poem and the ryming makes it great! :) awesome job keep writing :)
| MrsRenfro 7/27/05 . chapter 1
| mysticalfluff 7/26/05 . chapter 1
Nice and sweet, good rhyming.
| Unready 7/24/05 . chapter 1
no one can resist rhyming...its a chronic syndrome
| AllyCred 7/23/05 . chapter 1
i love it the rhyme was the best and the wording was simply great...well done. lots of love AllyCred
| eden is burning 7/23/05 . chapter 1
I love the way it climaxes towards the end, and the rhyming is done really well, subtle but effective. I like it a lot. Good job!
| Ebony Stars 7/22/05 . chapter 1
I love the way it builds and is all tied together in the last stanza.
| these travels 7/22/05 . chapter 1
aw. what a short sweet poem.
i liked it.
| blacktearsofinnocence 7/21/05 . chapter 1
wow, i liked this song alot. its really short, though. i liked it so much i wish you would add more. but, of course your don't have to. well, KW! and thanx for the nice reviews! i'm so glad u enjoy my work!davida
| The Melissa Occult 7/21/05 . chapter 1
It's kind of neat to find a tuesday's child on here, most people are wednesday's and I'm the man who was thursday. It all works out. And about the poem... It's got a nice rhyme to it, I didn't notice it in some places, which is good, because it was all the more subtle.
| silkydaydreams 7/21/05 . chapter 1
wow, this is excellent. Kind of reminds me of teenagers who dream of being famous, because they cant stand their own lives. Good job : )
| simpleplan13 7/21/05 . chapter 1
nice personification... it flows well too... nice job.. great poem... thanks for your review
| a moth in lace 7/21/05 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this poem very much. It feels so honest and innocent and beautiful in the most pure degree. Music truly is beautiful, and you portrayed it very well. :)
| SayIt'sWrong 7/21/05 . chapter 1
Good rhyming, nice flow. Lovely piece. queenvixta