OMG! I love it. You really ended that well and i think the third line of the last stanza is my favorite. You have an amazing way with words!!

Wow, Great poem. I really liked it. It didn't really Rhyme, but, it...Damn, That word's slipping my mind again. It flows really well, and sounds great. Keep it up, and sorry for my lack of helpful reviewing =D

amazing descriptions... awesome poem

dark and haunting, the writing sends shivers down my spine when reading. a creepy, dark and hauntingly conveyed poem, wonderful.

~* noelle

I love it! Wonderful imagery! It was so dark and haunting! Sent a shiver down me! I love it!