I am enjoying this fic SO much. When's the next installment? I WANNA READ IT! keep up with this story. question though, is Grant gonna end up beating up Edison? If not, can he? I know that in some way Edison will get his comeuppance

Nice update. Can't wait for more!

Aww, Grant and Derrick are so adorable! But of course it won't last, since you know, the whole Cody and Grant thing (pretty obvious), but still...

I love this story! Please update!

's and X-Rated Thoughts- Luci-chan

I can't even explain how much I didn't expect that. Derek and Grant? Haha! And how old is Grant at this point in time that it comes up as an issue in converstaion? I knew he was older than Cody (or thought so at least) so how much older is he than Derek?

hey i love it! i've read both other storys! i hate Edison! i hate him i hate him i hate him! sorry... i dont like the hole dom/sub thing... MORE SOON please!

aw what a cute chapter! grant is so aw lovable lol

Its understandable that Cody neglects the alarming signs because of his lack of dating-experience and his personality. And Edison hides his true self sufficiently. Grant is really lucky to have met someone as likable as Derek on the first occasion.

Derek and Grant seem to be trotting along well. I wonder how Cody is going to play into this. You know, last chapter Edison made me think that perhaps hsi parents owned teh restuarant, or were waitstaff there, but he has a Lexus. This now confuzzles me. Aren't Lexus' pretty nice cars?

So I'm going to take a wild guess and say that this is the calm before the storm... Can't wait to read more!

Eddison is one of those people that makes you feel slimy all over...

But at the same time he's got that whole bad guy thing going on that on some sick level you still like him.

Although the whole controlling thing, not cool. But I know from Brian's Story how the relationship ends, kind of. It seems like it will be an interesting journey to that conclusion, though!

's and X-Rated Thoughts- Luci-chan

The plot starts promising with a fundamental change in Codys and Grants life and takes a dark and thrilling turn with the introduction of Edison. The different characters are believably portrayed and the short mention of Edisons background hints that even he may have reasons that certainly dont excuse but somehow explain his behaviour. Great story. I hope you update soon.

I'm not liking how this is going. Please don't let Cody be forced into anything he doesn't want. Edison is like 50x above his head.

I really don't get the whole dom/sub thing, it's not me and it's cool in most cases, but this is not one of those...I must say you are doing an excellent job at portraying Ed as an evil person!

Can't wait to read more from you!

YEH! I've been waiting for this for a long time! This is keeping me on the edge of my seat. The suspense is killing me. I hope you update this more frequently now. So happy.

uu yay! I like this story.