Another awesome poem! I just love your work!

Ok...A few mistakes in this poem...but i see where you are going at...I like how you wrote it but try to use deeper feelings next time...like how much pain you really felt...example...instead of just *ive tried so hard*...say...*the pain i tried to bear has taken its toll on me...* Just a suggestion. But keep on going at this.

Angel4soul

a fear of something can just grow stronger, as fueled by dark thoughts (oh demons)

but should we be so afraid, we arent even sure we are going away.

such sweet death.