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| Furhead 2005-08-22 ch 1, | i love your poetry and you are quickly becoming my favourite poet, even over poe, which is hard, the raven , so good. but it seems so much the less out of reach now that i see a poem come close if not reach such a high standard-WOW! |
| in theory 2005-07-23 ch 1, | Gorgeous, I love the lines 'A dream to the liar/a lie to the dreamer.' One little thing, the last line needs a gap between the+angry. Argh I sound like a retired English teacher. But seriously, really powerful piece of writing, definitely one of your best. x J |
| Hopeless-and-helpless01 2005-07-20 ch 1, | That was very good... i wish i could write like that. um... sorry that was fairly emotional and maybe thats why i liked itdanielle |