This is an awesome poem. I especially love the line "Leaving behind the woes of reality". I try to do that all the time, lol! I have to say it again, your use of description at the right times makes your poems so awesome. *loving your poem* :)

Keep writing,

Rhia

That is really beautiful! I love the end; I can relate some. I wil lread some of ur other pieces but I just realized my computer time is up. ttyl nona

I'm a dreamer. it's impossibly easy to get lost in the litle dream world. And then they tell you, "Back to earth, there will never be a giant squid in the run off pond."

Wow. You caught 'dreamer' perfectly. I could relate to this, and the poem was enchanting. Keep it up, and thanks for a good read!

The formatting in this peice made it a little choppy, but it also made me think. Each sentence could mean one thing, and then you'd read the next line. Over and over. Never really knowing...the descriptions were woven in so tightly that they left hardly any room for new perspective, but with the formatting it really made it...different. I'm not sure if the flow was a well matched price to pay, but htis peice definatly stood out. Lovely job.

i don't really think fall and shall rhyme, but that's ok. i can really relate to this piece. i feel like that a lot too. 0)

Such beautiful words. I'm a dreamer as well. Despite my dark corky nature when it comes to writing. The imagery in this is like a panting.

Wow that was such a beautiful poem. Amazing work!

Wow.. this paints such wistfully beautiful images in the readers' minds.. it's soothing to read. Like your other works, good job!

this is really good. very nice flow and it kept me in sink to the words. It's so touching and powerful that I just couldn't quit thinking about it, even now as I write this review. Awesome work!

Sorrow

Nothin' like being a dreamer. Another great job!

Gorgeous. As always, the depth of your thoughts touches the special spot of the reader. I look forward to more.

beautiful descriptions.. great poem

Beautiful and powerful.

I love this, thankyou so much. You wrote it perfectly, thank you so