Man. Actually literally going to Hell when my girlfriend tells me to is probably something I'd do, although I'd definitely be much, much more cheeky about it. XD "What do you mean, where am I? I'm here, right where you told me to b--oh, wait, hold on, hun, there's a guy with horns who wants to know if I have any change. Give me a sec."

Anyway, quite funny, and I especially liked the line about the steaks and the Dobermans. Not to mention the guy's outraged inner dialogue over his ruined shirt. Good. Stuff. =D

Firstly, loved the heading, gave me the chuckles! Your writing overall is one of the select few I can actually 'get into' on fictionpress - mainly as grammatically it is easy to follow, but is also thought provoking as far as content is concerned. Keep going!

Mx

This story is incredibly, horrifyingly grotesque . . . yet so very laughable. It is very funny. You provided vivid, clever imagery that was, though awfully disgusting, extremely comical.

Hahaha... I'm sure a lot of girls tell their boyfriends to go to hell... That was great!

NYO! Twisted... Not much more I can think of to say. Sorry.~~TaigaSama

I know many girls who want their boyfriend to go t hell...

Really, this is great. The description of the walls reminded me of American McGee's Alice. I loved it.C.

Well that was interesting... I loved the ending line. I'm wondering if you'll continue this to other locations? I like how you take a creepy location and make it sound so normal and even funny. Good work!

That... was simply awesome. Excellent job. [Grin]

lol that is kind of funny! I love the incorporation of humor and horror, a usually horrible combo