Very neat! Love all the imagery... very strong, very... good, for lack of a better word... I like! lots.

Very interesting, great imagery.

Wonderfully vivid and imaginative. Brilliant.

"Sandmen sprinkle sleeping dust on baby rats, as they curl up in lunar craters." I have no idea why, but that line touched me more than the rest. it's truly a gorgeous poem! the imagery is vivid, and thought it's quite long-looking in its format, it's amazing!