|Reviews for The Plunge|
| The Postscript 7/22/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful. This is deep but clear. The words are put together in such a way the lines flow until the end. The way you chose to write "an eternal staring/into eyes," is a little awkward to me. All in all, great job. Keep it up!
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/20/05 . chapter 1
An intoxication of the senses in this, very rich and foreboding.