I know it's sort of strange...but I both liked this and didn't like this. The first stanza is beautiful, and really draws you in deeper-wanting to know where you are going with this.The third stanza is what got me a little. I don't know, it just doesn't fit right with the rest of the piece. I think it is because of the way you worded your thoughts. Never the less, you end it beautifully. Keep writng, God bless, silent.

I like the feeling of emerging acceptance in this.