I think ya should capitalize it makes it more appealing. Don't get me wrong because I think it is a beautiful piece. Awesome job.

Needa S.

I really, really like this one. The images, the simple but powerful word choice...everything just fits together. Is there a reason you have not been capitalizing words, though? Anyway, wonderful job, again. You continue to amaze me and inspire me. Thank you for your reviews, again, for I can never thank you enough. Keep writing.

Imagery that reminds me of Heavens breathe. The ending stanza is like a soft whisper of hope. I loved this. Beauitful imagery. I love the metaphor of life in general. Wonderful. Thank you.

I love the last two lines, so secure and reassuring.