Wow...you know love. You know the brilliant ecstasy of it...the blinding coldness, the bitter loneliness, and then the warmth. The warmth is what makes it all worthwhile. Can't wait for the next chapter!

woah... i'm speachless!! this is too sweet

you are a very lucky person

A very meaningful story. You've captured emotions really well. You know, you could even convert a skeptic with this story. ^_^

Eep! I dont believe in love too much but damn you are one lucky girl! Great great writing

Aww... this is just so sweet! That's a very special relationship you have. I love it! I hope you'll get to see him again soon.

beaaautiful. You left me with no words to describe what it feels like to read that page. It is a very nice story. People who lives through that can feel really blessed. It makes me feel happy. keep up the good work.

Wow. This is soooo sweet!! The best story I've read in a long time... send it to ChickenSoup!

Oh that's soo sweet. And romantic and anything else that I can't think of at the moment. Please could you use enter spaces between your paragraphs as to make it easier to read and not so mushed together?

"If you’ve made it this far, I just wanted to say I love you!" Er, sorry but I already have a boyfriend. Haha, jk, I know what you mean. It's been a great story and I'd love to read some more... if that's no problem with you, I mean.

hahahahahahahaha I had a great laugh! "I didn’t think it was possible for you to USE that many words at once" hahahahaha. bravooooo, bravoooooo! *applauses* I love the "what if it's on?" part, that is so true!!

It sounds like a poem sorta. But other than that it's great. Grammer's good and it seems really nice. Come out with chapter 2 soon! The guy, Logan, seems real hunky! Good luck with him!

:) Good story, short and sweet! Well written. He sounds like a cutie!!

Whoopsies. I just realized I didn't spell check this, so excuse the bad grammar/made up words/ misspellings. Thanks!