O.O deep dark review... i liked it..write more

This is really good. I like the imagery and the theme of the poem. Good job. queenvixta

'As you try to erase your scars' that's a really great ending to this, I also really love the beginning. The sins never really let us be do they?

Again thanks for the reviews, and it's okay, you don't have to review every single one, or any at all. There's no onbligation, though I do really appreciate hearing what you have to say. I'd rather you review seldom but have the review mean something, then review everything and each review being a few words or repeated statement, like 'great job'.

ANNA

This is a great poem. I really like it a lot. :)

[Please review some of my work when you have time. :) Thanks.]

Struggling-soul