it creates a sense of depressed optimism (if that makes any sense) i like it... who couldn't relate?

oh! I loved it! ur a great writter!

By the way thanks for the review!

I like the way you wrote the last four lines. You're a excellent writer I'll keep on eye on your work. This piece has a wonderful imagery working. Keep it up! Thanks for reviewing my boyfriend's story and if you have time please try and read some of my work

Very nice. I like the rhythm of this one.

I like this poem its cool . It sounds like it should be made into a song .

This reminds me of a certain poem I read about the stars and their beauty. Great imagery and gets me in an unwind feeling. Beautiful. :)

Trinity

Short and cute! n_n

wow i really like this, its really short, but very good, good job. I like the ryming in the second half especialy

Very nice. Wonderfully done.

Needa S.

Nice poem. At first site it is a simple one, but if you look deeper, it really has a meaning. I like it a lot! Keep on writing.

xDutch Girl

Nice, a renewal of hope. Or rejuvenation.

Nice concept, the last few lines of the first stanza seem a little twee, maybe you could seperate the 5th line, which would make it sound less like a greeting card ie "to protect us/help us/to guide all our ways" having said that it would disrupt your regular rythm, which is nice and sort of reflects a stars life, coming our every night, dissappearing in the day, always in a predictable place in the sky. I love your second stanza, the idea of dying in and being reborn th enext day is inspired. A really good poem all in all. Ps I reveiw poems when i think i have somting constructive to say, or when i think somthing is particularly good, not simply to receive reveiws in return. However if you do me the curtesy of reveiwing somthing of mine, i'll try to return the favour.