I really like this one! Keep it up... Holly. :)

*~Julie

I agree with those above that this poem was excellent and beautifully worded.

I thought it was interesting that you chose to refer to the poems using the word "who" instead of "that" in the second to last line. It makes the poems seem almost human, almost like little fairies or something flitting just out of sight.

I don't know, maybe that just makes sense in my own mind.

I can totally relate. I often get things in my head and then they disappear before I have a chance to write them down. I absolutely love this poem... it has a certain quality that I can't really say but it is worthy of highest praise. Excellent!

Well, I have to say, I've been there. It just seems more with me, it's almost like proverbs or tidbits of advice or something that just never get a chance to come up. Like one, for instance: In the desert, which is more important; the water or the canteen? A nice thought you have here. Keep it up. (and try to get some sleep)

Ah, I can relate to this SO well! I love it! It's just so beautifully worded! I just adore it. I don't have praise high enough. This is truly wonderful. It flows so well and it's just perfect. Awesome, awesome work, keep writing! I am so putting this on favorites. ^.^

Nice poem, interesting.