The line 'I want to be your tomorrow' really hits a vibe! Awesome work!

Oh, I like that! It's essential in love that both give everything, not just love, in whatever shallow meaning the word is interpreted. And I like your style - you have a nice knack with words. Keep it up.

wow! this is just so amazing! i loved the last line and the rhyming is just so incredible! the imagery is especially beautiful and thank u for ur awesome review! actually, my mom found my poem more funny than a proud thing, but still thanx again. amazing poem! going on my favs!

I like this poem even though it contains many a cliche. It's like you've just summarised the whole subjects in a brief, clever way. It's good, well done.