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Love to Laugh
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseI just want to say that I LOVED this poem. I feel like if more people realized this and looked at life the same way you do then the world would be a far better place to live in. I feel like printing this out and putting it on my wall or something as a constant reminder to myself whenever things seem to go wrong!
Arichos
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abusewhoa. deep in thought, with words that flow pretty well. me like.
Ebony Stars
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abuseright I've read all your poems and they all have the same problem: too vague and too cliche. They are all quite fanciful and dreamy, it's a nice quality but problems do not go away if you ignore them and just dream of the answers. write about your life as it is, not as you want it to be. You have talent, you just need to polish a little. I hope this helps and I look forward to reading more. *ebony*
really-chilly
2005-07-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great poem. I like your thoughts about family and friends being there to back you up. Well done.
FunkyFlower16
2005-07-21
ch 1,
abusegreat poem vc! i totally agree with ur views of life. another awesome work!
Duck8
2005-07-21
ch 1,
abuseWOW me likes nicely written. i completely agree that life can be dark and hard but the light is always there if u just look. Go u :)
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