Tragic, yet filled with hope. Beautiful.

oh. *sits back and wipes tears from cheeks**silver tears stream down my cheeks*this is amazing.i love it. the rhyming is beautiful, and just seems to be natural for this poem. the idea is so sad and haunting, and beautiful at the same time, really amazing.the imagery is so beautiful, and it over all gives a sense of hope... so wonderfull!!well done!

Very lovely. :]

Wow, I love it, soo much. Its beautiful, so beautiful. I have one suggestions. Add punctuation, even if its minimal. Punctuation adds effect, suspense, and ensures people are reading your poem the way you want your words to be read.

If you want you can look at some of my poems on my file. If not, no worries. I am adding this to my favourate stories because this is fab!!

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