Wow...another great poem. You're good at writing them. :)

Wow... I can feel the hatred of the 'understudy' here. Jealousy issues, Cuz? ^_^

Very nice flow and rhythm.

Very nice ^_^ That's all I can think to say for this one : ) Very nice ^_^

Hey Mizu^-^ Very lovely song/poem how's the tune go? I hope this review works cuz the comp is stupid. But I liked it was neat!Toge

Oh...wow...This is really, striking to me. Maybe 'cause I've got that stupid obsession with being thin right now, and I'm such a goddamned perfectionist...but this is awesome. I'm serious. 'Why can’t I be herWith all her beautyWhy can’t I be herInstead of being the understudy(Hate and jealousy and agony)She is idolized by all'My favorite lines of the entire song. Keep writing Mizu. ^^;

Saddening, indeed. Nice bits in the parenthesis.