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| Archipelago 2005-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseHey, pleasant poem. Interesting in how you did it, I think it would make a great children's rhyme like that 1, 2 buckle my shoe thing except not as uh childish the only reason i say children's rhyme is because it has feeling like that around it a different tone though. |
| lackluster 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseit seems to me like 'dark' lulluby...or I'm just weird like that. either way, wonderful work! |
| MarkE 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI think its a nice lil poem to pass the time. Good Job. |