The rhythm dissappeared a few times but the message was defenitely more important. Somethign we've all thought about...Ver well written!

"You’ve spent your whole lifeProving your worth to peopleWho never thought twice about youAnd that was your biggest mistake"

I love it. It's so sad yet beautiful. Another great piece.-Jinx

I can totally relate.. great job

Very Good. Please read and review!