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| Reviews for Burn |
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   Jezsh 4/4/06 . chapter 6lovely progression, the interplay of fire and water. I like the power of your words. |
| Sita Fuoco 8/19/05 . chapter 6 Wonderfully written. Each haiku so descriptive. It's hard to find haikus with such emotion, and it seems so effortless. Usually, you get lost and have no idea what the haiku is about. Yours have perfect - or near perfect - diction, and are just - as said - wonderful. I hope you write more, I really enjoy reading your work. Keep it up! *Sita |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 6 umm... all i can say is WOW! Kira |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 5 this is a very powerful poem, the whole collection is actually Kira |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 4 this is a most interesting collection of poems. well i must read on to see how it turns out. wonderful poem keep writing! Kira |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 3 anger, doth it burn? |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 2 kind of defiant, kinda |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/22/05 . chapter 1 cool poem |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 6 Very nice. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 5 Nice contrast between tears and fire. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 4 WOW. That last line just blew me away. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 3 This is one of my favs. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 2 I love this motif of burning and fire. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/21/05 . chapter 1 Very vivid, powerful. |
| Lacus 7/21/05 . chapter 1 Veyr Powerful- the meaning came through very clearly and had a sence of power to it, very good. -Hanon |
