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   smile for the sunshine 7/30/07 . chapter 1Sweet. Beautiful. You are an incredible writer. |
| Aslan Israel 8/1/05 . chapter 1 Second stanza was the best; it just really got me. great job. |
| ash vault rose garden 7/23/05 . chapter 1 I like your angsty works -, and you're really great at them _ |
| hiding behind amber eyes 7/21/05 . chapter 1 good poem. i like the ending and the sincere smile part keep writing! |
| thank you thoughtful 7/21/05 . chapter 1 breath-taking. |
| marshbar960 7/21/05 . chapter 1 very emotional and expressive... i liked how you said "never look back" at the end. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
| Cloud Burst 7/21/05 . chapter 1 very powerful and absorbing. awesome poem! |
