|Reviews for self construction|
| smile for the sunshine 7/30/07 . chapter 1
Sweet. Beautiful. You are an incredible writer.
| Aslan Israel 8/1/05 . chapter 1
Second stanza was the best; it just really got me. great job.
| ash vault rose garden 7/23/05 . chapter 1
I like your angsty works -, and you're really great at them _
| hiding behind amber eyes 7/21/05 . chapter 1
good poem. i like the ending and the sincere smile part keep writing!
| thank you thoughtful 7/21/05 . chapter 1
| marshbar960 7/21/05 . chapter 1
very emotional and expressive... i liked how you said "never look back" at the end. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| Cloud Burst 7/21/05 . chapter 1
very powerful and absorbing. awesome poem!