yeah...I know what you mean here. Too young to do things...that I suppose "feel good" or something like that...can't really explain it too well but you did.

~Sorrow~

interesting, what it could portray..

the eight year old thing caught me, i think said eight...

we are all so young and innocent, and a pocketful of change.

Great poem, I love the stanza on change, I could reallu seeing that all happening. Very well done.

keep it up.

Damn. I love the almost anger, the almost romance, the almost everything in this. Very awesome.

Rich in feeling, this one. I love the "change" stanza.

reminds me of 'young love'...great work, as always

Good poem! And that's all there is to it.