I like this one more than your unicorn one, although that one is good. I know it's harder to be constrained to a scheme.

You have great imagery and alliteration in this. "wail of wind and water" . . . "chill challenge," etc. The rhythms are amazing, too. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it.

Oh that's awesome. I can tell you really, really love words. Your poems are really beautiful. Even though it's just descriptions, this poem really told a story. I'd like to meet this character now!

Very, very beautiful. 'Fraid I can't be much commentsy use on it, so I'll just say that I really liked it.

Very powerful, very vivid. Beautiful poem all round. ^-^ Especially liked the effectiveness of the ending, and I must admit that I'm not overly fond of one liners even when that's what they're supposed to be. Very well done, me dear! ^-^

wow, that was beautiful! i get the feeling i've read it before, but as fuddled as my brain is it's hard to tell. ^_~

A very beautiful piece. That "Lord of Sorrow" was especially poignant. Loved it!

beautiful. i can't even describe how much i enjoyed this.