This is why you're a very good poet

Oh wow.

That's all I can say to this, is wow.

DEFINITELY one of the best poems I've ever read. I just freaking LOVE this.

So amazing, keep up the great work!

Wow. Very emotive, and the questions work really well. Powerful ending, too, I particularly love the line 'Your demise and my defeat', it seems so right in the poem even though it has such a deep, sad meaning. Great work.