OMG...

This was completely capturing and very sad. It was so amazing that it just has to go onto my fav's. I mean I have never personally had to experience something such as this, but I can understand it from the point off view that you are posing. It so real and mesmorising!!

great Job!!

oh wow. The message was loud and clear to me. It reminded me of an elderly couple, y'knoe together forever, until the husband dies, and the wife follows after. I like the style, I'm glad I read it.

This is really well written. You really showed the change from being alive and beautiful to dying. Great job