FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseA purely geisha moment caught in calligraphy and American foolishness. I like it. |
| linaeve 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abusenicely done. I actually collect those boxes (well. only the nice-looking ones.) and store all sorts of things in them... your description is succint and definitely accurate. just a small thing: "chi pao"--Romanized, I think it is spelt that way. if he really was looking into an english-chinese dictionary, it probably would've said 旗袍 - "qi pao". |
| smile persephone 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery, the flow, everything is perfect. I adore this poem! This is one of the best poems that I've read it quite some time. |
| poetic abortion 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuselove it, like a story rich with poetic imagery. beautiful writing and just astounding, well done! ~* noelle |
| Archipelago 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI agree with another reviewer it does sound like a story(really good one) kinda. It's so beautiful. I can't point out any specific part I liked the whole thing was good. |
| dark88poet 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abusethis is so good. Like a story really, with brilliant poetic imagry. Thanks to you i'm off to write now. darsk88poet |
| amphiboly 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseTUM-TUM. i blogged about you. (: anyway, this is simply brilliant. i think it's one of your best. i love the line "she can't be translated with your english(-chinese) ways". it's so deep and i bet you must have been inspired after rhd. (: the bamboo flute part was really good too. i love you, tum. (: |