I'm glad I decided to keep reading this instead of finding something to eat. Thomas just has no luck does he? I guess Augustus really tore him a new **. Emoticons can't express how I looked when I read that Augustus had violated poor Thomas's stomach.

I’m so happy that I finally have some free time so I can read your story. I have a lot of catching up to do. I love how completely fabulous Ae is. I wonder if Kate is so grumpy because he has such a girly name. Poor Thomas. He breaks my heart and makes me laugh at the same time. I’ll read the other chapters as soon as I can. And thanks for the review!

Wait! Ok ok. So..Ae no longer has his wings?! OMG NO

Angsty, twisted and perverted though this is, I rather like like it. The characters certainly have depth and originality, though Thomas does seem to have the ANGSTYTEEN! stereotype thing going on. I don't blame him, seeing as his childhood, and life since then has been about the biggest pyschologically damaging pile of ** ever written about.


UPDATE! *shakes fist*

No time for a proper comment, but...

good chapter, I love this story and the one prior. Usually, by now, I get tired of stories that stretch on too long. But somehow, with the way you tied together incidents and developed the characters, the story holds my interests.

wonderful, wonderful job. i hope you write the next installment soon. bye.

I really liked this chapter! So full of emotion, angst and pain I love it!
Poor Thomas and his ravished mind..maybe Ae has some spell on him to make him tell all? XD

Ha! *hugs* I had no idea what happened... but poor Thomas! *hugs* he's talking a lot now to make up for it later...

KATE! *points* that was that dude from the letters... *misses the letters*

Good job dear ^^

I am now very thouroughly confused, so where is Thomas? What's he gonna do now? I want more odd sexual moments.
Happy Be-lated Holidays

Damnit, poor Thomas...Gah he makes my heart hurt. Damnit, there's Alaric being forgotten again. Damnit...XD

Ae is pretty cool...and is it bad of me to think Sanro looks hot as hell XD

Evil cliffhanger! Update soon, but please let good things happen! I can't take this for too much XD.

I like Ae, although his choice in fashion is eye blinding. There's one thing that's been bugging me. How is Moma pronounced? Is it pronounced the way it’s spelled? Anyway, I really liked the chapter, and I’m surprised Thomas actually began to talk about his mother, to Ae of all people. It just dawned on me that Thomas seems to suffer from Stockholm Syndrome, which makes me love this fic even more (I hardly ever see fics where an abused character suffers some form of Stockholm Syndrome).

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Yay another chapter, this story is too weird, but I have gotten over that. So what's the deal with demon, I can't really figure out what he's there for, well update soon.

Hm...Not much happened, and there wasn't even that much character development. Bleh. You can do better.

Why is Demrys, if he cares for Thomas even the slightest bit, so unreceptive to his wants? **.

Ae seems to have a hell of a fashion sense. If I was Thomas I would have probably scratched my eyes out or something. The way Thomas interacts with Ae kept me laughing.

Starts now? Didn't his hell started waay back in the day? XD

Evil fp wouldn't let me review again, but I HAD TO! so I'm doing it anonymously xD.

OMG I LOVE Demrys and Thomas interacting at the end! They're soo damn funny XD. Thomas has again gotten a few more points with me for some reason. I like how he finds the encounters with the Sanro-Naj exciting and fun. He seems a bit more normal in this chapter.

Only one nitpick. I didn't like how you and Thomas referred Ae as "thing", over and over. I don't know why...just seems wrong.

Oh yeah, totally love Ae!! He's freaking hilarious XD.

Hm...

So much mixed feelings with this one!! XD.

The sex/rape scene was going really good but then you stopped short again!! ALAS! *wanted detailed hot incesty sex* XD But I love how his mind like snapped near the end and he believed she was his mother. I looved that.

What I REALLY loved about this chapter was how Thomas completely lost his mind. I don't know why, but I loved it. It was so freaking interesting. How he went looking for Moma so desperately. I actually felt for him (and you know how much I hate him XD). Definitely an improvement from the first version, love the added detailed that made me feel something for Thomas.

Augustus was also very cool, even if he was a son of a ** XD.

The other place I had mixed emotions about was the last part, but I think it's more of a nitpick of mine than anything. Though you did explain more, it's...a summary. I don't particulary like summaries in a story (especially at the end! *rants about stupid book she once read*). But overall I think it's alright. I still hate Thomas XD though I understand now why he's the way he is. Still...he's too freaking messed up. And he's antilove. Antilove makes my chest hurt. lol.

Well this definitely got my curiousity for this story going again XD. Especially because of the middle part of this chapter (LOVE) and Yay! for mention of Demrys' siblings! XD.