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Alexis1702 2009-11-26 . chapter 26
Hey. Where have you been? Please update soon!
Xxo
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its-like-i-sed 2009-11-24 . chapter 26
hi, swish is totally amazin im really in love with it i was practically crying in the past chapter so pls pls update n give a happy ending i would absolutely love it. xx
notwithoutyou 2009-11-24 . chapter 25
I've been waiting for you to update Swish for so long. You're an amazing author and I can't wait to read the last two chapters. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story :)
tiktok09 2009-11-24 . chapter 26
this story is really good- i love it!! aw i hope james and taylor get back together and that she wins the championship! haha keep up the great work and please update soon:D
tiktok09 2009-11-24 . chapter 18
this story is soo good!! i LOVE it! (in a non-creepyish way) haha just wanted to say that josh is hilarious and i was crying when he called liz a butterfly ready to burst out of her cocoon in a previous chapter!!:D
taytay<3jamjamxD 2009-11-23 . chapter 26
uhm...i know i may be annoying already
and i know that this may sound pretty WEIRD...but...
i just wonder when their birthdays are...=)

OHMYGOSH...i'm so weird...sorry about that :(
it's just so addicting you know??
taytay<3jamjamxD 2009-11-22 . chapter 26
i agree with the others that this should be a screenplay!
i hope it does ;)
hm...
taytay<3jamjamxD 2009-11-22 . chapter 26
jamjam? =)) i know...
haha...

hey...i just wanna ask if there are really just two more chapters to go?

anyways...

I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY! such a bummer it's going to end soon though...but, I STILL ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY LOVE IT! it's so great...ugh :)

uhm...i just wonder what they look like in your perspective...you know..like pictures...those would be great

and...i wish you could post the next chapter soon :> when you have time...

thnks for being AWESOME :)
Sweet Phyllida 2009-11-21 . chapter 23
I'm still addicted to this story, and I think it'd make a great screenplay . . . please please write more. I've re-read it so many times already, and I love it so much. Reminds me of Sarah Dessen, now that I think of if. =)
SMiiLez 2009-11-20 . chapter 26
Oh my gosh!! I love your story. It's so awesome, and you really know your basketball stuff. James is so awesome, but he's just being a sore rejected loser coz Taylor made a mistake. Seriously, get over it! He's an idiot anyway, well, a hot one! I noticed you haven't updated in a while and I was just wondering, if you were going to do that soon, coz I wanna know what happens!! I hope Mercedes dies...
iamagaraeagas 2009-11-20 . chapter 26
You have got to be one of the best authors in the WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD! I mean SERIOUSLY, I almost cried during the boys vs girls game. In fact I did actually tear up. I mean COME ON it's only a story but it is well written that I made my heart in my throat during most of it

I am officially in love
Rooni 2009-11-14 . chapter 26
Excellent work :)

The caliber of your writing is very high in my opinion and your descriptive abilities are very smooth and pleasant and the basketball descriptions are engaging and adrenaline inducing (I loved the boys vs girls game). Your characters are exceptionally well drawn, even those who the focus isn't on ( For example, I find Maya's characters very entertaining and her facets well drawn even though she isn't the most apparent character). I love both James and Taylor, and I particularly admire how their characters are very grey and that neither one of them plays the victim for long. I admit that I was extremely mad at Taylor at the dance - it almost felt like she was waiting for James to make a mistake, but I admire how this is truly explained by her insecurities and her sense of pressure. Also the conversation between Taylor and James where he says they can never be together was very sound and logical given the turn of events, but we all know that Love isn't logical :D

God, that was a way way too long post, but I just read all the 24 chapters so you will have to excuse me. Can't wait for the ending.
HPRK08 2009-11-13 . chapter 1
Update please!
Kiss-My-Sass87 2009-11-12 . chapter 26
Just saying, I almost cried. UPDATE
Patriotic Elementional 2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Hey, please update, this story is completely awesome but its been forever! I've been waiting for months to get this story up again and i'm sure that lots of your fans have too!
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