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| Sandy Sparkle 2008-08-16 ch 25, | abuseDoes she quit? How does she and James make up? I am saddened that this fic is seemingly dead. I'm kind of in love with it. |
| Kiara 2008-08-16 ch 25, anon. | abuseYou are amazing |
| GoldenStarryNight 2008-08-11 ch 25, | abusejames! *swoon* well, except for the way he behaved in this chapter :p im looking forward to the last few chapters! |
| Amanda S 2008-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abusewell i read swish quite some time ago. and the sad part was is that i found out you had stopped updating and that was going to be the last of Taylor and James i would hear of for a while. now i am not going to lie to you i am very disappointed and it saddens me that someone so talented has started something i i pretty much believe is close to perfection and has finished this obvious masterpiece. you think i am just saying that for my health? uh heck no you really are that amazing at writing and this story proves. whatever is holding you back i hope you can fight it. maybe you don't want to be a writer and i say if you have the talent you use it but remember with great power comes a great responsibility ;) i love good old spidey anyway you're amazing and i do hope you can finish swish cuz i mean people do to see the Mona Lisa right and that was finished. it is extremely famous right? don't you want to be the Da Vinci of the writers? because honestly i think you can be :) ROCK ON BABE KEEP WRITING YOU ARE SO LOVED :D obsessed fan fortunately or unfortunately? u decide;)- Amanda S |
| PrincessNancy 2008-08-01 ch 25, | abuseOMG. PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-28 ch 25, | abuseUpdate soon! Love it! |
| blair powers 2008-07-27 ch 25, | abuseAH!! ok so i've been addictingly reading this since 12:00 PM and now its 4 in the morning and was just frantically waiting for another chapter to appear!! i'm like WAY hooked and i know thta its been a long time since you've posted (3 years!) but i'm really hoping that youll post again soon!! pleasepleaseplease? that was like a cliffhanger but not with the whole James/Taylor thing-can't wait for more :) :) |
| Japanese-Fanatic 2008-07-25 ch 25, | abuseOh my God this is probably the best story i have read on this website in a long time!! I can't wait for more so update ASAP! Japanese~fanatic |
| llgg89375 2008-07-16 ch 25, | abuseWOW THAT SURE WAS A TWIST!I REALLY THOUGHT THEYD END UP TOGETHER!OH WELL LIKE YOUR STORY STATEZ... "YOU CANT WIN IT ALL"! I HOPE THEREZ AT LEAST A SEQUEL! |
| dribble 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! But please finish it!! can't wait...please update!! |
| AkunamattataTM 2008-07-14 ch 25, | abuseNO! Is that it? thats the end? James is no more is taylor'd life?! Say it aint so! |
| mk985 2008-07-11 ch 25, anon. | abusewow I've been literally glued to my chair - with an extremely sore butt to add :P - reading your story all day. I think that your descriptions and characterizations are really great. I love the tension that you have created between your 2 leads, it is really sweet, hot and riveting all at the same time. Anyways I really hope that you continue and finish this story (even if it is just a few condensed, super, action-packed chapters ;). I know you haven't updated in ages and it may be hard getting back in character, but I think I speak for more than myself when I say that it is so hard to be left hanging when everything is still unresolved between Taylor and James! |
| daling 2008-07-09 ch 25, | abuseo please update soon.! xD |
| FarFromGrace 2008-07-08 ch 25, | abuseWow.. So far this story is simply breathtaking. Quick question. Do you play basketball by any chance? You write the games really well, so it would be seem like you do. I love the characters. Taylor isnt the streotypical weak herione, yes shes indesicive and gets clouded but so does everyone, and overall shes confident and proud everything someone aspires to be. I really liked her. James as well, he was undeniably sexy and arrogant (just the way I like them haha) Even the supporting cast were brilliant, the always present best friend, the much needed gay friend, and Michael the perfect best friend for James seeing as he seems to be the complete opposite. I even liked Summer, and how you made the cheerleader actually nice and supportive instead of the bitchy backstabber. The plot is amazing as well, not too dramatic, well thought out, and actually realistic. I hope you didnt get bored of this story seeing as it hasnt been updated in almost a year. I know writers block and life in general really get in the way. I write on fanfiction and havent updated in ages either. And if this is actually the ending, which I dont think it is, then its sad that they didnt end up together, even though I liked his breakup it was completley in character and fit perfectly with her realization that she did actually love him after ages of letting pride and what not cloud her. I really do hope you decide to update this story, and even if you dont im glad I read it. It was just so amazing! xx |
| CKin2U 2008-07-07 ch 25, anon. | abuseUpdate asap pls! I, as well as many others, want to know what happens! |