ah men, can't live with them, can't live without them! there's a great rhythm in this.

I'm sorry that you had to go through this, and if I had the chance I could have changed it for you, but unfortunately, I'm not god. However, this poem is amazing, and I have to say it's one of my favorites, even though it still hurts, I know that you'll pull through, and that you will be strong! :)

Nice poem. Sad, but unfortunately, that's the way it turns out to be most times. Pleasse keep up the good work in your writing and pleasre review some of my work if you get the chance. Again, good work!

Unfortunatly that's the way life is, most boys are scum, and then you find one that you love and then he really will mean it. Just keep on searching.