 Ann Elizabeth 2005-08-18 . chapter 1I'll make it short, so unlike me. I was just thinking about animals not being able to see the color and some animals not being able to see the sky at all and how...God made the sky such a beautiful blue...and we get to see it in all its wonder.
Loved your poem...again...let me say again, keep writing! |
 The Postscript 2005-07-23 . chapter 1Beautiful, I think I like this one the best of all your poetry I've read so far, but that may be because I'm a big fan of nature...anyway, I especially love those lines "Lakes didn't have to glitter/The ocean did have to tide/The sky could have been bland/The wind didn't have to glide" Such images! Keep writing. God bless. |