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downtownpreppie 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
your writing is becoming redundant.

Hope you could bring to light new perspectives.
Ann Elizabeth 2005-08-18 . chapter 1
I'll make it short, so unlike me. I was just thinking about animals not being able to see the color and some animals not being able to see the sky at all and how...God made the sky such a beautiful blue...and we get to see it in all its wonder.

Loved your poem...again...let me say again, keep writing!
Needa S 2005-07-24 . chapter 1
Amen! Another beautiful wite by you. Excellent piece. Keep spreading the word. God Bless ya.

Needa S.
The Postscript 2005-07-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful, I think I like this one the best of all your poetry I've read so far, but that may be because I'm a big fan of nature...anyway, I especially love those lines "Lakes didn't have to glitter/The ocean did have to tide/The sky could have been bland/The wind didn't have to glide" Such images! Keep writing. God bless.
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