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K.M.Mackenzie 2008-08-14 ch 12,	abuseHi, yup, this story has a lot of potential. Did you just stop caring about it or something, because, as plots go, it's not a particularly complicated one? It shouldn't be such a chore to write since, as a fellow writer, I can understand the excitement that comes from creating something that you want to know the ending to as much as all of your readers. And the story is THAT good. So the only solution I can find is that you lost interest. Obviously that last update took a good year. And it's been over another long one so I hope you can come back to it. It'd be nice to see Stella/Nicolai relationship resolved and the revenge against the Barbies followed through.
Miss Sadistic 2008-07-22 ch 12,	abuseI had just finished reading your story and I must say, I think it is wonderful in every sense of the word. You even managed to get some humor into those depressing save-the-drama-for-me-mama parts. Like the 'Only YOU can prevent forest fire' scene. I'm not sure if that was supposed to be funny, or if I'm just easily amused, but I guess it proves my point for now. The anticipation is eating me alive! And I didn't even expect that Nicolai would end up with Bridget. Sure I had my suspicions, but HELL! Why is he with her in the first place? Did she blackmail him? Manipulate maybe? Did she tell him that those things at the party didn't happen, or maybe he didn't find out at all, and Bridget apologized for ditching them in the first place and he forgave her? And why only recently did they start dating, since it was only six months? Why are they keeping how they became a couple a secret? Did she bribe him (unlikely unless it was something he valued...but what do I know)? Did he actually like her genuinly, even though he hates Gretchen and her and Bridget obviosly have a lot in common? (It was mentioned that he still thought of Stella, to my great relief.:P) Were they even friends when Stella had gone? If so, how? And what does Stella have up her sleeve anyway? We already know that she's not really the revenge type but is still willing to get some anyways. What is she gonna do? Is she gonna find out the weaknesses of Gretchen and use them against her? Maybe somehow she can find out what made her this way. Perhaps she's going to get the dirt on her and blackmail her herself? Spread rumors? Public humiliation? Get all the members of Gretchen Haters Anonymous and devise a plan? Is she gonna tell her off and thus still being able to publicly humiliate her? Oh so many questions without answers, and not a chapter to give them! Woe is the life of a fellow reader! Ahem, anyways... I hope you update soon (or at all) and don't go into that year long wait again...this anxiety is killing me! Best wishes to your in-the-rut stage and I hope I've given you some ideas if you haven't already planned the whole story out yet! I hope this review modivates you as I hoped it did. This is the longest one I've done since I've registered onto this site! ...Keep up the awesome work is what I'm simply trying to say here! May the God of all things literature grant you safe guidance through the plague we all know and refer to as Writer's Block. Sincrely, Miss Sadistic
Super.Maddy 2008-04-23 ch 12,	abuseHey Hey! This is a great story so far! Gah please update soon, i realy want to see Stelle take down Gretchen. It's nearly been a year since you updated. But anyhoodle. Good luck with the story. xx Maddy
emrevolemina 2008-03-21 ch 12,	abuseupdate please this is so good!
Niquie Quinn 2008-02-20 ch 12, anon.	abuseoh, i hope you update soon. this is getting pretty interesting.
SapphireEyes16 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abusei luv the idea of your story, so update soon!
EmmaDarling 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely adore your story, however are you ever going to update? Honestly its a fantastic story, perhaps on of the best on Fictionpress, and i love how its developed sofar.
Inky-Angel 2007-11-16 ch 12, anon.	abuseYou started writing again! Yay! =D It's a pretty short chapter, but it's an update, anyway. Do you still need help trying to figure out what to write? I can't even imagine... I love writing too much to do stuff that would sap my creativity. It would just kill me. =\ But if you need help, I'll try!
savsnickadoodle 2007-10-20 ch 12,	abuseThis is really good! Can't wait to see what Stella's revenge plan is. Update soon, pretty, pretty please!
Gilly Bean2 2007-10-07 ch 12,	abuseInteresting story. I know all about university classes that do not require creativity. I was in mostly science classes in undergrad, and now med school does not call for much creativity, at least not in the same way as writing or playing music does. Which is why I have to release that pent up creativity. Recently it has been more through music than through writing just because of time constraints, though. When I was in undergrad, though, I sometimes had a hard time writing because after all of the papers I had to write for classes the last thing I wanted to do was write anything else. I hope you get back your inspiration, though, because this really is an intriguing story. Well, I have to go. Cheers! Gilly Bean
Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2007-10-06 ch 12,	abuseThis is a fantastic story! Ah, revenge is almost there! I'd love to see what happens when Stella finally takes a step up on Gretchen. I hope Pari doesn't hate her now, I mean, Pari seems to be the type of character who would rationalize situations, no? Guh! I cannot wait for an update :D
longypk 2007-10-02 ch 12,	abuseI love this story! I can't wait until you update, so update as soon as possible please :)
Wicca Girl 2007-08-16 ch 12,	abuseHey I love the chapters nd I hope u can update sooner. If u need any help Updating(since ur in college) U can count on me. Aim: princesa102093 e-mail:
rachel 2007-08-01 ch 12, anon.	abusei love this series and i want to help! here are a few ideas to inspire you... .nico should ask stella why she's ignoring him and stella goes and shutt herself in her room . while she's in her room she sees a shoebox/ photo album which is full of memories of her old days in devon. . pari should try to aplogize to stella and walk in on stella looking through the memories .stella can't keep all of it bottled inside her so she spills to pari every detail . there's a new party and someone else gets targeted stella steps in and helps , then pari steps in and the rest of the gang step in . afterwards they all hang out in one of their dorms and stella tries to comfort her by telling her she (stella) knows what it feels like. the gang start questioning her . . they have another get together and the 3 guys get stella drunk and they play truth or dare . one question could be asked by nico , 'why do you ignore me?' . another could be asked by someone else ,' what do you mean by you know how it feels' refering to the other night. . stella drunkingly tells them all note: . i know the characters know her as elle but stella is such a lovely name :) .these are idea in case you have no clue what to do .i admit this is what i want to happen but you can change it as much as you like . email if you actually want to use my ideas (but i doubt you will want to though) . i'm sorry that other reviewers have to read my ideas its just i don't have a ictionpress account so i can't PM you final note: YAY YOU'RE BACK! rachel xoxo
MelGrl 2007-07-28 ch 12,	abuseThere's a lot of drama i here. I personally think that Gretchen should be taken down and see how it feels to be humiliated. Elle should get her revenge. Can't wait to see how it will turn out, so please update soon! =)

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