Why is nick dating bridget? And I hope that Elle does something smart like cynically plan our her actions! Because heaven know's if she just waltz's up and stops something, not only will she be beaten by everyone, but gretchen will have a hit on her! Be smart and maybe wiggle into gretchen's good faith before smashing her down or something!
And I like Peri! I hope she didn't make a mess with her!
Update soon! I don't think I've felt so pashionate about a story in a long, long time!

You go girl!

O.O!
HE THINKS SHE'S HIS TRUE LOVE! hehe! so he is pining over her!

I'd feel betrayed! How dare he date the person who made their lives hell!

:O I'm speechless!

Whats next, whats next?

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its REALLY good... keep writing?

Okay, I love this story, and I know that you're in college, but you're killing me here... You haven't updated in so long that my mind is just wondering what will happen next. Will she cave in, stick out, or anything else... Please update. I know how hard it is for you, but it's been so long.
Of course I can't be mad at you because it is YOUR book and it is SOO good that i'll make you a deal...
If you make the next chapter so extra delicious and soo god, instead of a filler page, then I will be so grateful that when ever I think about Vertigo... you my friend will be thought of also... Deal?
LOL well, I can't really blame you, but please update and I know you will make this a great story. Please don't abandon it, it's too good. Bye!

Oh my gosh! This is one of the best stories I've EVER read! You need to continue, and maybe tell Nico, like on accident. She could be like just thinking about what happened and he randomly pops up, and she accidently blubbers out then whole story! Or not, whatever (just as long as you keep working, it's almost 2009!)

please update soon!

Hi, yup, this story has a lot of potential. Did you just stop caring about it or something, because, as plots go, it's not a particularly complicated one? It shouldn't be such a chore to write since, as a fellow writer, I can understand the excitement that comes from creating something that you want to know the ending to as much as all of your readers. And the story is THAT good. So the only solution I can find is that you lost interest. Obviously that last update took a good year. And it's been over another long one so I hope you can come back to it. It'd be nice to see Stella/Nicolai relationship resolved and the revenge against the Barbies followed through.

I had just finished reading your story and I must say, I think it is wonderful in every sense of the word. You even managed to get some humor into those depressing save-the-drama-for-me-mama parts. Like the 'Only YOU can prevent forest fire' scene. I'm not sure if that was supposed to be funny, or if I'm just easily amused, but I guess it proves my point for now.

The anticipation is eating me alive! And I didn't even expect that Nicolai would end up with Bridget. Sure I had my suspicions, but HELL! Why is he with her in the first place? Did she blackmail him? Manipulate maybe? Did she tell him that those things at the party didn't happen, or maybe he didn't find out at all, and Bridget apologized for ditching them in the first place and he forgave her? And why only recently did they start dating, since it was only six months? Why are they keeping how they became a couple a secret? Did she bribe him (unlikely unless it was something he valued...but what do I know)? Did he actually like her genuinly, even though he hates Gretchen and her and Bridget obviosly have a lot in common? (It was mentioned that he still thought of Stella, to my great relief.:P) Were they even friends when Stella had gone? If so, how?

And what does Stella have up her sleeve anyway? We already know that she's not really the revenge type but is still willing to get some anyways. What is she gonna do? Is she gonna find out the weaknesses of Gretchen and use them against her? Maybe somehow she can find out what made her this way. Perhaps she's going to get the dirt on her and blackmail her herself? Spread rumors? Public humiliation? Get all the members of Gretchen Haters Anonymous and devise a plan? Is she gonna tell her off and thus still being able to publicly humiliate her?

Oh so many questions without answers, and not a chapter to give them! Woe is the life of a fellow reader!

Ahem, anyways...

I hope you update soon (or at all) and don't go into that year long wait again...this anxiety is killing me! Best wishes to your in-the-rut stage and I hope I've given you some ideas if you haven't already planned the whole story out yet! I hope this review modivates you as I hoped it did. This is the longest one I've done since I've registered onto this site!

...Keep up the awesome work is what I'm simply trying to say here! May the God of all things literature grant you safe guidance through the plague we all know and refer to as Writer's Block.

Sincrely, Miss Sadistic

Hey Hey!
This is a great story so far!
Gah please update soon, i realy want
to see Stelle take down Gretchen.
It's nearly been a year since you updated.
But anyhoodle.
Good luck with the story.

xx Maddy

update please this is so good!

oh, i hope you update soon. this is getting pretty interesting.