Wow.

Heheh, great poem. Short, but packs a punch, especially that last line. Chills. Lol.

simple and effective. i really liked this

Aw...sad and sweet. Good job!

This is very true. Thats how i felt in a dream i had once. very scary. have you heard of those dreams where you fall and if you dont stop falling you never wake up? ah just scaring ya. lol

Interesting description...I like it.

"I cock my head, and I listen

To the promises of below"

I really liked that part. it had a nice flow and your work was so original. Nice job on this! You're on my faves!