Wow, I like it, it speaks to me right now. It seems as if my whole life is waiting, then I end up just getting ** slapped by reality. So yeah it kicked **. I also really like the imagery you use, it creates a sadly reminiscent fairy tale feel to the rythem. Squirrels.

Joseph

Right sorry bout not giving you a signed review but im lazy : ). Very nice poem can't think of much else keep writing.

Short and sad. Lovely imagery. Keep it up! =)

~Eyes of Amethyst