*Mouth agape* WOAH. It is positively INCREDIBLE. OMG. It's making me want to write. You how that happens? You read something REALLY amazing and it ignites a burning desire within you write something equally outstanding?

Well yeah. I can't believe this. Simply amazing. WOW. everything. So undescribingly awesome. LOVE it. L.O.V.E. LOVE IT.

I'm in love with this poem. Its the greatest example of choice, love, sin, and suffering you have shown. This poem has a really big story behind it, huge even. This poem is actually hard to call a poem, is a story, that is why. This story is a great one, it has all the intense emotions, Love, Hate, Suffering, Paradice, Heartbreak. All of it is twisted and put into a twisted-story-Poem...Amazing job Scrunchii. I would say your real name...But yeah.

Wow, that is some very intense imagery.I loved it.

W O W, just wow. I absolutely LOVE this poem. It makes a great deal of sense to one is going on my favorites list!