Hah. The Labyrinth.

I love the way you wrote this though. It flowed very smoothly.

Oh my god! How many chances would there be for me to come across this poem! I was amazed at first at how similar it sounded to a certain ballroom scene in a certain movie, then I realized you were telling the tale of Sarah and Jareth in POETRY, and such beautiful well-written poetry too! This was a wonderful, beautiful poem. *sniffles* Nearly brought me to tears!

~Britt~P.S. Poor Jareth!

Wow. The words flow so smoothly and fit perfectly. A lovely tale, although it reminds me of a certain movie... ;) It seems as if you have painted this piece using the very magic that your poem speaks of. A beautiful poem with all the power, grace, and emotion anyone could ask for. Well done!

This is so beautiful, I have nothing to criticise, the words were excellent. I also love how it's told through a poem. Great job!

Wow..Just stunning..I love it..

Sara

Wow... just... wow.

*ahem* Casting that emabraasing comment aside, let me be serious (joke). The imagery is beautiful, and the vividness was something not to be missed. The words just flowed out my mouth so smoothly. The rhyming didn't seem forced, though there were some lines that were inconsistent with the whole rhyme. But nonetheless, this was a wonderful read. Keep writing! =)

ps: Did I mention that I love the fact that you told this story through a poem? I guess I didn't, but now you know. So... yeah. ^_^ *feeling inspired*

~Eyes of Amethyst