Great song. Nice title.

Twilight Starr

very welld one, I like it did convey the message... good job

I'd get rid of the first five lines. I also think that you might want to have a stronger hook than "weird love". The line "when you rip my heart you seemed like an angel" was cool. And I loved "leaves fall like a hymn to the desperation".

Wow great! I especially like the last verse and the line 'leaves fall like a hymn to the desperation'. A really upbeat but dark song I love it)