Omg, that...was...so...incredibly...GOOD!! lol. my cousin katie says "why'd you kill her off?!" We both gasped outloud at the same time. OH MY GOD IT WAS SOO GOD!

oh my gosh, that was so sad, I cried, I really did, when I read the last sentence. This story was great, your writing ability is amazing!

wow...

completely powerful.

wow...